- Not very attractive
- Not particularly stylish
- Background is full of shadows
- Wooden board across the models back not edited out of the shot
- More attractive model
- Stylish clothing and stance
- Zero shadow coverage on the background
- Edited to get rid of any blemished to the skin
- High quality camera used to take the shot
Secondly, with the production of my music magazine I showed a lot of my ideas which I had created and then doubled it with another idea to compare which one looks better. This shows I was much more thorough with the production of my magazine.
Finally, the ways in which I represented my audience in every was created a much bigger connection in relation to my preliminary task. This is proved further in my evaluation.


